マンション購入のために英語を学びたいのですが、どうすれば良いですか？

[マンション検討中さん]

中卒の元マンション建設作業員です。大手ゼネコンのS建設の下うけの仕事をやっていて、巨大マンション建設現場を見て感げきしました。僕も、そのうちあんなマンションが買えればいいなと思い、英語の勉強を始めることにしました。ここの皆さんは、マンションの拳闘者や購入者の皆さんと思いますが、英語の勉強するためのアドバイスをください。

とりあえず自分でできることは自分でしなくっちゃと思い、僕、早速毎日一箱吸っていたタバコを1本減らし、一日19本で我慢しています。これで年間365本も減らせます。年間1万円くらいも節約できるのマンションはすぐ買えそうです。

やっぱ、アメリカとかに旅行するのが一番でしょうか？それとも六本木あたりの外人バーで修行した方が早いでしょうかね？

[5201: 匿名さん]

文法や単語のミスを指摘して欲しければそう頼めば良い。

英語の家庭教師を頼むのも良いかも。

でも、日本語がちゃんと書けないと無理かも。

[5202: 匿名さん]

>>5200 匿名さん

ありがとうございます！

[5203: 職人]

Hello Every One
Seems to have been very popular here since I visited last time, wow !
I study English every days because my dream is to live in Okinawa,
in an apartment with great ocean view !
I feel my english skills getting better and better every days.
I thank those anonymous people who suggested me a everyday small
try to touch english articles in Financial Times.
I can read now almost any article in Financial Times without any help of
dictionaries, yet I consult my favorite dictionary to make sure of
japanese expression of some words.
I feel now as if I were an English man w.
Though tomorrow is Sunday, I have to work from morning.
Bye　
みんなもがんばって

[5204: 匿名さん]

英語学習のアドバイスとしては、まず基本的な文法と語彙を身につけることが大切です。教科書やオンライン教材を使って学ぶことができます。次に、リスニングとスピーキングの練習をすることが重要です。英語の音楽を聴いたり、映画やドラマを見たりすると良いでしょう。また、英語を話す機会を増やすために、言語交換パートナーや英会話クラスに参加するのもおすすめです。

アメリカへの旅行や外人バーでの修行も有効ですが、それらは高度なスキルを磨くためのもので、基本的な英語力がなければ効果は限定的です。まずは基礎を固めることから始めてみてください。

[5205: 匿名さん]

>>5079
だと、こんな感じだよ。14点で済んだようね。

【ご参考】
また、難題をお願いできますでしょうか。最近間違いだらけの英文がネット上の掲示板に投稿されているのを見つけました。投稿者は誤りの箇所を指摘して欲しいそうです。ものすごく誤りがあって大変とは思いますが、20点くらい単語のミスや文法のミス、英文では使わない表現、冗長な表現などを指摘をいただけますでしょうか。よろしくお願いします。
（英文）
Hello everybodies
I am off today because today is a national holiday.
Recall first of all that one has to modify the end of the word "body" to
bodies if one makes the plural form, not leaving -y as it is !
OK.
Now we start the today's talk.
We are familiar with carbon, aren't we ?
Carbon forms hybrides. The electron configuration of the carbon atom is
1s22s22px2py, so we should expect carbon to have a covalence of 2, and
to form the hybride CH2.
Unfortunately for a simple view, the only well known hybride of carbon
with one carbon atom, who is the principal character created by Osamu
Tezuka, in the molecule is the compound methane with the molecular
formula CH4.
It is getting dark here in Okinawa.
My skyscraper apartment has a marvelous ocean view.
So much for today.
Everyone take care !
ChatGPT
Sure, here are the corrections and suggestions for improvement:

1."everybodies" should be "everybody" (singular).

2."off today because today is a national holiday" can be simplified to "off today because it's a national holiday" to avoid repetition.

3."Recall first of all that one has to modify the end of the word 'body' to bodies if one makes the plural form, not leaving -y as it is!" can be revised to "First of all, remember to modify the end of the word 'body' to 'bodies' when making it plural, rather than leaving '-y' as it is."
4."today's talk" is fine, but it's more common to say "today's discussion" or "today's topic."
5."We are familiar with carbon, aren't we ?" is correct but can be improved by removing the space before the question mark: "We are familiar with carbon, aren't we?"
6."Carbon forms hybrides." should be "Carbon forms hybrids."
7."1s22s22px2py" can be simplified to "1s22s22p2."
8."covalence" should be "valence."
9."to form the hybride CH2" can be revised to "to form the hybrid CH?."
10."the only well known hybride of carbon with one carbon atom, who is the principal character created by Osamu Tezuka, in the molecule is the compound methane" is grammatically incorrect and confusing. It seems like there is a mix-up between chemical terminology and a reference to a character. It should be rephrased for clarity.
11."It is getting dark here in Okinawa." is fine but could be combined with the next sentence for better flow.
12."My skyscraper apartment has a marvelous ocean view." is grammatically correct but could be simplified to "My apartment in the skyscraper has a marvelous ocean view."
13."So much for today." is okay but can be replaced with a more formal closing like "That's all for today."
14."Everyone take care !" should be "Everyone, take care!"
Here's the revised version:

"Hello everybody,
I'm off today because it's a national holiday. First of all, remember to modify the end of the word 'body' to 'bodies' when making it plural, rather than leaving '-y' as it is.
Now let's start today's discussion. Are we all familiar with carbon?
Carbon forms hybrids. The electron configuration of the carbon atom is 1s22s22p2, so we should expect carbon to have a valence of 2 and to form the hybrid CH?.
Unfortunately, despite this simple view, the only well-known compound of carbon with one carbon atom is methane with the molecular formula CH?.
It's getting dark here in Okinawa. My apartment in the skyscraper has a marvelous ocean view.
That's all for today. Everyone, take care!"

[5206: 匿名さん]

単語を覚えるといいですね。

[5207: 匿名さん]

>>5203 職人さん

ちょっと上達したか？学習能力少しくらいあるのかな？

【ご参考】
この投稿者の方は中学校で英語をしっかり学ばかったようで、段落に分けて文章を書けないようですが、前回と同じように、できる限りたくさん、単語のミスや文法のミス、英文では使わない表現、冗長な表現などを指摘をしていただき、さらに可能であれば、適切に段落分けされた文章を改訂版としてお教えいただければと思います。よろしくお願いいたします。
（英文）
Hello Every One
Seems to have been very popular here since I visited last time, wow !
I study English every days because my dream is to live in Okinawa,
in an apartment with great ocean view !
I feel my english skills getting better and better every days.
I thank those anonymous people who suggested me a everyday small
try to touch english articles in Financial Times.
I can read now almost any article in Financial Times without any help of
dictionaries, yet I consult my favorite dictionary to make sure of
japanese expression of some words.
I feel now as if I were an English man w.
Though tomorrow is Sunday, I have to work from morning.
Bye　

ChatGPT
Here are the corrections and suggestions for improvement:

1."Hello Every One" should be "Hello everyone" (lowercase).
2."Seems to have been very popular here since I visited last time, wow !" can be revised for clarity: "It seems this place has become very popular since my last visit, wow!"
3."I study English every days" should be "I study English every day."
4."I feel my english skills getting better and better every days." can be improved: "I feel my English skills improving more and more every day."
5."I thank those anonymous people who suggested me a everyday small try to touch english articles in Financial Times." has several errors. It should be: 6."I thank those anonymous people who suggested that I make a daily effort to read English articles in the Financial Times."
6."I can read now almost any article in Financial Times without any help of dictionaries, yet I consult my favorite dictionary to make sure of japanese expression of some words." can be revised: "I can now read almost any article in the Financial Times without the help of dictionaries, although I still consult my favorite dictionary to confirm the Japanese expressions of some words."
7."I feel now as if I were an English man w." seems incomplete. It's not clear what "w." stands for.
8."Though tomorrow is Sunday, I have to work from morning." is fine but can be improved with punctuation: "Although tomorrow is Sunday, I have to work from morning."
9."Bye" is okay but can be a bit abrupt. Consider adding a polite closing like "Goodbye" or "Take care."
Here's the revised version with appropriate paragraph breaks:

Hello everyone,

It seems this place has become very popular since my last visit, wow! I study English every day because my dream is to live in Okinawa, in an apartment with a great ocean view! I feel my English skills improving more and more every day.

I thank those anonymous people who suggested that I make a daily effort to read English articles in the Financial Times. I can now read almost any article in the Financial Times without the help of dictionaries, although I still consult my favorite dictionary to confirm the Japanese expressions of some words.

I feel now as if I were an English man [unclear]. Although tomorrow is Sunday, I have to work from morning.

Goodbye.





段落分けを学びましょうね。がんばれよ。

[5208: 匿名さん]

＞アメリカとかに旅行するのが一番でしょうか？

アメリカは入国がめんどうです。入国が楽なヨーロッパがいいですね。

[5209: 港区タワマンの化学者]

6."Carbon forms hybrides." should be "Carbon forms hybrids."

笑　これがAIの限界だなw

[5210: 匿名さん]

>>5207 匿名さん

段落分けができて、それらしく見えても、書いてある内容が、小学生の作文のように内容がバラバラなのは仕方がないようですね。

やはり日本語でちゃんと文章が書けないと、英語だけ勉強しても無意味というのがよくわかりました。

[5211: 匿名さん]

>>5209 港区タワマンの化学者さん

そりゃ限界はあるでしょう。頭のおかしい人の言葉までは推測できないでしょうから。

[5213: 匿名さん]

>>5209 港区タワマンの化学者さん

単に英語の文法等のチェックに化学者の出番はないと思うが？大丈夫？

[5214: 匿名さん]

>>5209 港区タワマンの化学者さん

単に英語の文法等のチェックに化学者の出番はないと思うが？大丈夫？

英語のできない翻訳家はどうなったの？例によって消息不明？

[5215: 匿名さん]

しかし英語のできないスレ主やエセアドバイザーには、ナンノコッチャわからないのではないかな？

まあ翻訳ソフトで翻訳すればよいか？

だったら最初にしっかりと日本語で書いてAIに翻訳させれば良いだけだと思う。

翻訳者とか翻訳家は無用の長物の時代。

低能と喫煙者はもっと不要だが。

[5216: 匿名さん]

まだやってんの？

>>5160 匿名さん

くだらないことしてるあんたが低能に見える。
馬鹿みたいだね。

[5218: 匿名さん]

まず基本的な文法と語彙を身につけることが大切です。教科書やオンライン教材を使って学ぶことができます。次に、リスニングとスピーキングの練習をすることが重要です。英語の音楽を聴いたり、映画やドラマを見たりすると良いでしょう。また、英語を話す機会を増やすために、言語交換パートナーや英会話クラスに参加するのもおすすめです。

[5220: 匿名さん]

>>5219 港区タワマンの化学者さん さん

それはどうでもいいことなんですが？